Your editing has showed me what a slim and healthy article should look like.
我的文章通过您的审核和建议变得很精简。
翻译为英文是：
My article has been streamlined through your reviews and suggestions.
注：尊重知识，请提问者及时采纳。
Your editing has showed me what a slim and healthy article should look like.
我的文章通过您的审核和建议变得很精简。
翻译为英文是：
My article has been streamlined through your reviews and suggestions.
注：尊重知识，请提问者及时采纳。